Akash, these images form a decent effort at constructing a campaign for your fashion brand and tour talk was illuminating in this respect. What we appear to have is almost two separate campaigns here - one image suggests the identity of power and success and the others are less successful. Why is this so? In the presentation/analysis you showed that you had a clear audience and sense of purpose in the design of these images but perhaps a little more ambition in location might have supported your intent. Technically there is evidence of capability and you show some promise in this - the images are sharp and there is evidence of narrative in the composition. The logo works but is a little dominant - how could you have fixed this? Overall, you have shown some attempt to apply what has been learned/discussed and this will serve as a basis to move forward from.
Akash, these images form a decent effort at constructing a campaign for your fashion brand and tour talk was illuminating in this respect. What we appear to have is almost two separate campaigns here - one image suggests the identity of power and success and the others are less successful. Why is this so?
ReplyDeleteIn the presentation/analysis you showed that you had a clear audience and sense of purpose in the design of these images but perhaps a little more ambition in location might have supported your intent.
Technically there is evidence of capability and you show some promise in this - the images are sharp and there is evidence of narrative in the composition.
The logo works but is a little dominant - how could you have fixed this?
Overall, you have shown some attempt to apply what has been learned/discussed and this will serve as a basis to move forward from.